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Es gehört nur halb hier hin, aber irgendwie doch:

Es gab ja den Mensch-English Thread... da haben sich ja einige versucht, was von Herbert auf Englisch zu übersetzen. Es hat mich gereizt. Ich habe es getan

Der Nichtmitsinger hats getestet, es ist sogar auf den Song halbwegs singbar, auch wenn man verdammt schnell sein muß und der Refrain - zumindest für mich - ein Zungenbrecher ersten Grades ist.

Vielleicht möchte sich ja mal wer, der singen kann, daran versuchen? Vielleicht wer außer Teppi, unserem Klassenbesten

Without you


You always promised to ain’t stop love me
Just by lie and to optimistic guaranty
It finally clamed and rushed away

Your troubles deposed to my cogitations
With all your lament
You tested my patience
All just torture-love and I fed up!

All my appeals were set to nothing
Next to my chums you drove me blushing
And every breath of mine just annoyed.

Whole my love you considered as amusing
I just asked for what you were retaliating
And what the indictments were caused on

It’s so well without you
Life’s such smooth without you
It feels splendid
Without you indeed

Your eye’s task was changed just to debase me
When I hovered in heaven you told me of hell’s scenes
Sabotaged every delight by cattily intrigues

Beside all this by time I got ignored
I did best efforts and you’ve been bored
Finally you didn’t even commiserate

Fortunately I just turned this page
And ended this cruel torture for wage
Not one moment lost for regret

Since that day I really feel like reborn
No more love letters I write and torn
And no one who forces back to reality

It’s so well without you
Life’s such smooth without you
It feels splendid
Without you indeed

No one who ruthly act out the caprices,
Whishes me in an ocean that head high rises
Who attests me guiltiness for a heart of stone

You placidly tried to ditch me over seven seas
Dreamed of seeing me crawling on my knees
But you really didn’t know how hard I am

It’s so well without you
Life’s such smooth without you
It feels splendid
Without you indeed

Was meint ihr? Wenn es den Song gäbe, könnte er so klingen?